Film Feedback

Lucy Potter: WWW: 'Camera angles and the shots are done very nicely'

EBI: 'Story explained better, more dialouge, sound effect when gun is shot to make more realistic'

Joei Hen: WWW: 'Camera angles are good for some shots. eg: the one going round the corner'

EBI: 'Cut in a close up at the begining and some sounds need to be off'

Katie Price: WWW: 'The black and white works well, the shots & different camera angles are really good'

EBI: 'Bit too dark at points, some of the sound needs to be taken off & some bits need to be louder'

Julia: WWW: 'Cameras angles are well thought out, black and white effect creates atmosphere effectively, maybe need some more close up reaction shots'

EBI: 'Sound of background speech to be taken out or shots edited tighter'.

Rosie: 'In parts of the shot you can hear the camera man talking, some good shots seem too dark, end shots are good. I like the location'

Shaan: 'Can hear too much background sound. Lighting on end shot is good. Murder scene shots are good'

We have heeded the criticism and fed off the positive. To improve upon this we have altered the lighting in scenes where it was insufficent. I have stopped swearing at Chris and Niro over filming to get rid of the sound problem. To clear the story up we have actually changed the arrangement of scenes to give a Quentin Tarnitinoesque feel. Unfortunately we have not come up for a solution of the "skrrr" static sound in the background.